ext_23768 ([identity profile] wendymr.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] teleidoplex 2007-01-05 05:44 pm (UTC)

This is so much more than smut, really, even though the smut itself is very well-written. I loved the previous chapter with Nine, the aching loneliness we can sense within Nine, his need for Rose's love and his inability to say the same words in return. And his 'I want not to forget' just hurt.

This chapter, too - I loved the image of Nine and Ten kissing and fondling each other, and I just bet Rose would've loved to see them do more :) Besides that, Ten's need to get Rose back with him, his fear when he thinks for a minute that she's not coming and their conversation about the forgetting were very well done.

I want more. And I want Nine ;)

Oh, and about going to get Captain Jack? Excellent idea! *grin*

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