Finally got a chance to read this as I've been out of town...it's fantastic! I can't wait to read the rest. I'm also very glad to hear that you're very wordy when writing smut...go ahead, turn it into an epic, I'll read it all! ;)
Loved the focus on Nine this chapter, it's so heartbreaking that he has to forget all of this. The exchange where he tells Rose that he doesn't want to forget was such a poignant scene. And I loved the "I love you" bit...it's so hard for him to say the words, but he is so desperate to hear them from her.
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Date: 2007-01-01 09:25 pm (UTC)Loved the focus on Nine this chapter, it's so heartbreaking that he has to forget all of this. The exchange where he tells Rose that he doesn't want to forget was such a poignant scene. And I loved the "I love you" bit...it's so hard for him to say the words, but he is so desperate to hear them from her.
Really lovely all around!