I have a hard time actually thinking of this as smut. To me smut implies something dirty - this is kinky, but not dirty. On the contrary, it's beautiful, everything done and written with such love that you can feel it coming off the page (computer screen?).
Even the anal sex, which always carries overtones of "dirty", "wrong". Of course she'd want to have them both at once. You've done an amazing job of effortlessly making your reader realize that.
Thanks for writing this. Can't wait to see where it goes.
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Date: 2007-01-08 04:57 pm (UTC)Even the anal sex, which always carries overtones of "dirty", "wrong". Of course she'd want to have them both at once. You've done an amazing job of effortlessly making your reader realize that.
Thanks for writing this. Can't wait to see where it goes.